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PostSubject: Brandy's Poetry   Tue May 13, 2014 12:49 pm

Birds of a Feather
You and I are birds of a feather
Two peas in a pod are we
Through high tides and stormy weather
By my side is where you'll be


And even though I have other friends
You're kept as best company
Because as my whole world ends
You'll be there, comforting me


And when we've grown old and brittle
Feeble, decrepit, and worn
Our time left on this earth will be little
But our friendship will still be sworn

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PostSubject: Re: Brandy's Poetry   Wed May 14, 2014 9:36 am

As She Passed
I was sipping my coffee as she passed
Her hair frizzed up from the rain
Her face was frantic
Her voice was cracked
She was searching for something in vain

The wind started howling as she passed
Pushing her frail figure that way
Her umbrella upturned
And then, wayward bound
She watched as it flew away

I just had to wonder as she passed
Just what kind of person she was
What she would do
Were she in my shoes
Or what I would do in hers

It struck me like lightning as she passed
The thing she searched for held meaning
Because when her umbrella
Abandoned her there
She took a deep breath and searched on

I watched from my shelter as she passed
And realized what I failed to see
She bent over
To pick it up
A pretty gold engagement ring

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PostSubject: Re: Brandy's Poetry   Wed May 14, 2014 9:47 am

excellent work brandy!! Very Happy That first one is my favourite. (I assume that it was about you and Austin.) Really awesome lines, I could almost see you. The second also had beautiful imagery! I love them both, good work and keep it up!! Razz

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